that would be awesome. I think I've got a handle on the punctuation, and of course I'll go through it with a fine-toothed-comb later anyway.
just want to make sure this, like, actually makes sense. because sometimes it feels like I'm watching a play where the actors are making crap of the blocking... you know, "I move here because my author director told me to, and wave my hands, and deliver a line" -- that sort of thing. is what I don't want. but what I fear. um yeah. ...
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Date: 2005-10-24 08:46 am (UTC)just want to make sure this, like, actually makes sense. because sometimes it feels like I'm watching a play where the actors are making crap of the blocking... you know, "I move here because my
authordirector told me to, and wave my hands, and deliver a line" -- that sort of thing. is what I don't want. but what I fear. um yeah. ...I'll just... e-mail it, shall I?