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themeletor) wrote2005-05-17 01:00 pm
themeletor) wrote2005-05-17 01:00 pm
Because I knew you...
So, here's the deal.
We're working on PtT 25, and I suddenly realize, on a reread, that James is being a precocious so-not-fourteen-year-old git and trying to be all stiff-spined and stony. Is this in fact the same boy that ran away in PtT 19? Well he claims it's got something to do with the French kid. I want to justify it that way (partly because I really like a good portion of what I've got written so far, and am leery of a rewrite), really I do, but I'm not sure if it works.
Someone want to, ah, look it over? Weighs in at about 500 words, with your choice of AIM, e-mail, or a combination of the two.
John and I are doing hoopskirt-work from 1:35 until whenever that gets settled, but other than that I'm SO FREE. Until 3:15, when I go home and have no internet, for reasons that I'll not gripe about here.
Mmkay?
We're working on PtT 25, and I suddenly realize, on a reread, that James is being a precocious so-not-fourteen-year-old git and trying to be all stiff-spined and stony. Is this in fact the same boy that ran away in PtT 19? Well he claims it's got something to do with the French kid. I want to justify it that way (partly because I really like a good portion of what I've got written so far, and am leery of a rewrite), really I do, but I'm not sure if it works.
Someone want to, ah, look it over? Weighs in at about 500 words, with your choice of AIM, e-mail, or a combination of the two.
John and I are doing hoopskirt-work from 1:35 until whenever that gets settled, but other than that I'm SO FREE. Until 3:15, when I go home and have no internet, for reasons that I'll not gripe about here.
Mmkay?