It's always so much fun in science class when the teacher (reading aloud) gets to the paragraphs that insist on using the word 'organism' fourteen thousand times.

So... What if James meant to say to Teddy.. "Ah. Just the 'officer' I was hoping to see."
or... "I need you to be an 'officer' I can confide in. Is it too much to ask you be open to me?"

sorry. :p

I think when the urge hits you, you'll write more. You've already invested so much time in it. Until that time.. well, it's fortunate I read Batman slash. ^_^