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i'm cooking the veggies and valuing myself! ([personal profile] themeletor) wrote2005-10-17 12:14 am
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oh god oh god oh god

I think I may have just written the UGLIEST SENTENCE EVER.
changes right in the middle to the passive voice and everything.



I don't know whether to be morbidly impressed, or TO VOMIT.

hopefully the rest of this fic will make up for it.
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[identity profile] ima-pseudonym.livejournal.com 2005-10-16 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh! What was the sentence? *fully expects it to kick the crap out of the best of my sentences*

[identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com 2005-10-17 01:09 am (UTC)(link)
What's up with you English-speaking fellows that your language sucks so much that you hate entire shapes it takes on, such as passive voice?

I mean, dude. They should've thought better when creating it than balking at using it later.

[identity profile] wormmonabc.livejournal.com 2005-10-17 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
Vomit while being morbidly impressed. Me, I'm laughing my ass off.
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