themeletor: close-up of a cupcake in the grass against a blue sky (psychopharmacology)
i'm cooking the veggies and valuing myself! ([personal profile] themeletor) wrote2005-10-17 12:14 am

oh god oh god oh god

I think I may have just written the UGLIEST SENTENCE EVER.
changes right in the middle to the passive voice and everything.



I don't know whether to be morbidly impressed, or TO VOMIT.

hopefully the rest of this fic will make up for it.

[identity profile] meletor-et-al.livejournal.com 2005-10-16 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I hacked it up and changed it and NOW YOU CAN'T SEE IT HAH.

...butitwasprettydamnedawful.

[identity profile] ima-pseudonym.livejournal.com 2005-10-16 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Waaa!