Are we done yet?

[themeletor]

Are we done yet?

I think we are.

WITH THE FICATHON.
Finally.

Soooo...
who's my beta?

(almost 5,200 words WTF that's like as long as Straw Men I repeat WTF)

Comments

[wormmonabc.livejournal.com]

*waves flags* Yay for Melsie! I shall look over it, though I'd only catch glaringly obvious mistakes.

[meletor-et-al.livejournal.com]

I'm mostly looking for someone to make certain the whole thing doesn't suck like badness. I doubt I have the energy (or the time) to actually improve anything...

and RRARGH, CRAMPS, so no patience for it either.

[wormmonabc.livejournal.com]

*points at Mel* HAHAHA.

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

I can do it if you like. I'm not so hot with the punctiation (as well you know,) but I can certainly check for anything else...

[meletor-et-al.livejournal.com]

that would be awesome. I think I've got a handle on the punctuation, and of course I'll go through it with a fine-toothed-comb later anyway.

just want to make sure this, like, actually makes sense. because sometimes it feels like I'm watching a play where the actors are making crap of the blocking... you know, "I move here because my author director told me to, and wave my hands, and deliver a line" -- that sort of thing. is what I don't want. but what I fear. um yeah. ...

I'll just... e-mail it, shall I?

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

I'll be watching my inbox.

[meletor-et-al.livejournal.com]

sent

[captain-molly.livejournal.com]

WHEEEEEEEEEEEE! I kinda went over it with those other people as you posted it in chunks. . .and it was good. If you need me, though, I'll be available until 6:30 Central Time.

[british-pickle.livejournal.com]

Am I qualified enough for it? :P

Is it movie!Wayne/Crane? Or something entirely different?