My writey-sense was so right about this one.

[themeletor]

HBP, page 199.

Mel, you will NOT read this all in one sitting. You've been at it since you came home from work. You need to have a two-handed life.


........don't wanna. wanna keep reading. don't care if it means I'll have finished the good stuff way too soon. don't care if it could well mean I get stuck back in HP fandom. don't care if it might further sabotage my wips.

This is a GOOD one, damnit!

Comments

[meletor-et-al.livejournal.com]

I changed a good bit of what's written there, and added a few pages. Would you rather swap / hold off? up to you.

[captain-molly.livejournal.com]

whatever you find easiest. Just let me know what makes your life easiest.

[meletor-et-al.livejournal.com]

doesn't matter to me. just thought you'd rather be able to actually read the good stuff... XD

I'll ship it over, and you do what you feel like. sound good? I'm really most worried about the characterizations, if you want something to target -- otherwise, just a "ooh this isn't bad; don't let it rot" would be fantastic. I've had fun writing it, and I want to be sure people have as much (albeit twisted) fun reading it.

[captain-molly.livejournal.com]

Can do, my dear. I'd be honored. :)